Long Sentences
I write long sentences. I usually weave them through a story, bobbing in and out, up and down causing the reader to run out of breath. However, not all long sentences are bad. I have to remember that after long extended sentences, I need to sprinkle in a few that are short. I need to use some of medium length to fill in thoughts.
Keep changing the length and rhythm of your word combinations by adding varied length questions. Use one-word phrases or expressions when possible. This will keep the reader from becoming exhausted, or board with your writing. The End.
Rory C. Keel
Wordsmith Six 
Your short post was a marathon! 🙂
My brain’s way of thinking appears to be complicated and lengthy, rather than in snappy one-bite sentences. I really had to work on cutting back their average length. I think it was a combination of writing loads of essays for uni (although I was allowed to write in my complicated and lengthy style, the experience of not understanding my own writing when I read it back lead me to strive in next essays to make my writing academic and readable) and actively working on shortening sentences that eventually made it a more natural process for me. But it was hard!
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