Little More Work

Little More Work

Rory Keel

 

Dialogue’s realistic,

the story moves along.

The characters are believable,

But the point of view is wrong.

The ending makes more sense,

The conflict gets resolved,

With proper punctuation

And the use of perfect tense.

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