Rory C. Keel
Here is a good example of the opening hook from Elmore Leonard’s The Tonto Woman.
The time would come, within a few years, when Ruben Vega would go to the church in Benson, kneel in the confessional, and say to the priest, “Bless me, Father, for I have sinned.”
With the first sentence, the writer creates interest with a scenario of a future event, What is the character Ruben Vega going to do?
the reader is HOOKED to continue reading in order to find out.
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